The Drawing is in relation to the story board ideas. They dont all fit together, i drew them so David can get some ideas for shots.
The last page does sort of run together, it incorporates davids idea of the animal being in the bush. With alternate endings we could find a way of leaving the ending open, but we don't want to over complicate it, a we only have 30-40 seconds.
The boards run down the page, not across.