THE STORY CUT FOR A 30 SECOND SHORT

MONGOL AND THE MARMOT CUT DOWN

Original Story.

• Set in Mongolia the landscape is vast, there will be Epic mountains and impressive sky.
• A Skinny Mongolian Chef is about to eat his food
• Secondary character Marmot steal his food.
• Chef chases the Marmot
• Chef falls over trips up splashes into mud.
• runs through a village 
• rolls downs a hill
• flys of the edge of the mounatain
• the Mongolian catches the Marmot in mid air.
• Just as he is about to kill the Marmot 
• Eagle swoops in and picks up the man instead.
• hunter becomes the hunted

30 Second Cut Down. 

• Set in Mongolia the landscape is vast, there will be Epic mountains and impressive sky.
• A Skinny Mongolian Chef is about to eat his food
• Secondary character Marmot steal his food.
• Chef chases the Marmot past another mongolian house , past a ruined temple, through some windy paths.
• rolls of the enge of the mountain into mid air and catches the Marmot
• Mongolian is about to kill the Marmot when an egale swoops in and grabs the man instead of the Marmot.

I have got rid of a lot of the running and cut straight to one run which will be more interesting and will allow us to  add in more modeling. Hayley came up with an idea of a ruined temple this could work really nicely if he was to run through it. Modeling could be basic and it will be blued most likely.

NOW THAT ARE GROUP HAS GROWN :) MAYBE WE CAN CHANGE A BIT.

• Originally I had a few alternative endings 
• One them featured a nomadic mongolian who began chasing the marmot on his poney.
• The poney could lead to wild camera angles however hard to animate.
• and the story was pretty much the same except the end
• Instead of an egale swooping in I though the mongol coud catch his pray and fly smack into something.
• When the camera pans back it reveals the great wall of china which divided these two nations the Chinese and the Mongolians.
• The little animal could run away, then you here shouts from the wall you dont see any more characters, are guy looks up and an arrow could be coming towards his head then it go's black THE END
• The idea was that in the last scene we would introduce these clash of two mighty cultures which later engaged in a huge war resulting in China being defeated to the Mongolians.
• I think the scene of this Nomadic Traveler suddenly being faced with this huge architectural might of the great wall could be interesting. however maybe the idea is to much and the audience might not get it, let me know what you think. I may be going over board!